Length: 10,000 words/ 53 pages
Heat Rating: 1 flame
What if God decided to give priests the power to punish the Commandment Breakers? What if the physical manifestation of your sin became your punishment?
Nathan Carver, a ten-year-old boy, only wants the love of his father, Jerry There is just one problem: his father is not sure Nathan is his son, since Nathan's family became one of the first families to experience the power and punishment of God's Commandment Breaker Patrol. Nathan has a twin brother, Izzy, born out of the sin of their mother, Lydia's, adultery. Izzy derives great pleasure in banishing his twin brother to Hell for the heck of it, as well as monopolizing their father's visitation time. The family has finally reached its breaking point. The estranged Carver family find themselves on the opposite side of the law, God's law, and they must find a way to band together to absolve their sins—or they may have to pay the ultimate sacrifice.